Caligula's Launderette

Ha ha, Michael would love to be the Fool's Duel mascot. I went over it a second time, and edited it, I think I caught most if not all of ...

And four... Tada, Cal.

Finally scanned in the rest. Here ya go, dearie. Cal.

Thank you all for your lovely crits and comments. Trident, thanks for pointing out that line that I had twice, I've deleated the superfluous one. To all, thanks again, for ...

I thought that Bella's clumsiness was overdone, I mean, no one's that clumsy. I'd have to disagree with that, clearly you haven't met my best friend. :D

I've printed out both the prologue and this to look over and jot on. I finished the prologue, and as soon as I get home from work, I'll get this ...

I'll do my best to steer away from that vat of cheese. After, all I keep all the cheesy-ness inside my head. Or, atleast I try. Thanks, Myth, for catching ...

Thank you, Myth, Shadow and Sam for those lovely crits and words. It was really hard for me to go a whole part without dialogue. I almost thought I should ...

Sam, yay! Thanks for bringing up all those good points. On Regan, would it help if I made her seem more desperate for the job, or her things more peasant-y? ...

Sarah, She talks about how she thought Merlin would be like, something about him being this figure of legend she knows about, and this-now Merlin shares the same name. Some ...

Hullo, Southern_Belle. You can call me Cal, or CL. First of all, this is a beautiful, lovely sonnet, and I want to applaud you for your ability to rhyme, something ...

Hullo, Southern_Belle. You can call me Cal, or CL. First of all, this is a beautiful, lovely sonnet, and I want to applaud you for your ability to rhyme, something ...

Thanks a bunch Myth, Good luck, too, with the Duel. You mention that you were confused about what was going on. Maybe, if I had Evadne and Aetius talk about ...

Sorry for being so tardy with this. I've split up the crit into two parts. Here is the first. The prince paused, unsure. [This sentence sounds weird, perhaps - The ...

Guess, who got down and dirty and edited? ME! Thank you all for your lovely comments and crits. And, yes, I've extended the beginning, and added more about the arm ...